I have issued a new press release. It removed the typos and misspellings of the past press release. And it focused the message more on the homeowner as opposed to a business owner.
I'm pretty pleased with the results.
I was disappointed that it didn't allow me to use html, or submit a true html link back to my page.
I'll look at what other press release organizations offer.
Press Release
Thanks for the comments so far. I really rushed the other one and had too many typos.
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